Library.
He has a distinguished walk; confidence. He doesn't push the library door, he touches it and it swoons. He walks straight past the shelves of books. Shakespeare? psh, please, he has no interest. Not today. He glazes over the sight of used computers. No emotion is shown. Everyone here has a different look. But not everyone is so happy to look in the mirror. We all, as girls who like boys, have a kind of strange attraction to this one. Confidence; the key.
cafe max.
The social hub. Table after table. Friendship, friendship. Don't let them crash. There are three places to buy food and drink. Each basically a replica of the other. Any irony? In a place where looking 'normal' is more unusual than having dyed hair and a pierced face. So original.
I really like this.
ReplyDeletetypo - H instead of He.
I like your writer's voice.
For improvement - focus on actually describing the place and the atmosphere in the place.