What can I say to her? Can I tell her
She’s cute, she’s pretty, beautiful? Lilly.
Would that be appreciated? Is that
Too forward? Will she friend-zone me? Does she
Like me? Does she just think I am a freak?
Does she want me to phone? She knows I can’t.
Does she even want me to text? You don’t
Give your number if you don’t want to text.
Do I say ‘hey’ or ‘hi’ or ‘hello’ or…?
Loving this.
ReplyDeleteFor improvement try to make it rhyme and maybe think about stressers
Thank you. There are stressers. Every other syllable is supposed to be accentuated. I didn't want it to rhyme, its a monologue.
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